Issue 27

I accidently made a new logo last week. The old one felt a tad stiff and robotic. Maybe formulaic?

And I’ve always adored the loose script-style logos that could just as easily be a graffiti tag.

Hope you like it. If you don’t, well, I’m not a designer…so deal with it.

Now, onto the ads.

remove everything but the essential.

scroll down to the bottom.

show, don’t tell.

“channeling the unapologetic authenticity of New York and the boldness of back-of-house culture.”

I’ve long had a fascination with Dennis Rodman.

Partially because I was born in the mid-90s on the outskirts of Chicago. But mostly because he’s a wild, unpredictable, animated enigma.

Best summed up by Chuck Daly, who once said to an assistant trying to help Rodman at practice, “You don’t put a saddle on a mustang.”

Nike understood Rodman. And they crafted this — as one person put it — “literally perfect” piece of advertising about him:

I’m not sure if this ad ever officially ran. But it’s a damn good piece of writing that captures one of the most important lessons every creative needs to learn: Great copy talks to the reader, not at them.

We often forget that the consumer is not a machine or a persona. They’re your wife. Your neighbor. Your brother. Your coworker. Your kid.

Speak to them accordingly.

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